Thursday, January 24, 2008
The Flaming Island blog 1
I'll tell you what happened to me. Me and my best friends were in the middle section. My friends name where Leon P. and Sam S. I was eating my Carmel Creams in between my friends. Then all of a sudden the cockpit shot off of the plane and landed in the middle of the Ocean. Then on both sides the edges of the plane ripped off in a shower of sparks. The boys who were sitting there were thrown out into the sky. I heard them crying out saying that they wanted to go home. On their faces was a deathly pallor. At first I thought it was a bad dream. Once they had been blown out of the plane the overhead compartments were ripped open and all of the luggage fell to the ground. Some of it fell out the gaps but soon they were blocked by some of it. Then we hit the ocean and the water started to fill up the plane. I saw my luggage floating and my friends did too. We grabbed them and went through the cockpit door and swam to the surface and laid on the beach quivering. Then we found a lagoon in the middle of the Island and we jumped in. Then we heard stuff in the bushes and we swam into a hole in the lagoon. When we got out of the water I grabbed my Carmel Creams and devoured two of them. Then I clambered up the waterfall. When my friends opened their luggage they vainly stressed out because everything inside was ruined and about how they can't very nice decorous. They began to fight over what was left and I had to interpose. Suddenly we heard a clamor. We began to run toward the sourse of the racket. We hit a grating of trees. My arm was jumble in the vines coming from the trees while going through them. We meat this really strident person. He would never stop talking. As we reach the noise we started to have a meating on who could be the of the lost boy's. So we all started to speculate who would it be. I had a indignation on siting on the grass. So we deacoted who would be leader of all of us and we choose the boy with the thing that called us. It think his name was Ralph.
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3 comments:
I liked How you described what happened when they were on the plane. I also think it is cool that your blog was about a boy with his friends, instead of just being alone. I think you should add more about the meeting, though.
Markus-
Can you check your usage of some of the words? Like strident and indignation? Can you also fix some of the grammer? A little spellcheck never goes amiss. Great job though. Where's blog 2?
I liked how you discribed what happened, but some of your words were miss used. Also some of your phrases didn't make sense. Another thing is the plane, if the cockpit and the wings fell off there would be so much preasure in the cabin that everyone would die.
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